i think youve made it a bit too beige feeling, her face s too spotless, and is oddly red anyway, i dont think you got the modelto capture a sense of vitality, rather just found someone to wear the costume. hope your newer work is better (:
hi. thanks alot for ur constructive comment though im veri sry to say my face is indeed kind of spotless after makeup. and for the odd redness, it might b due to ur screen settings, because my photog has done quality check on the lighting and color wise.
for the point on the sense of vitality i would say that my other photos of rikku can better potray that this photo was the last i have choosen due to imperfections
if u cld, do look through the rest of my gallery whn u are free before commenting thanks alot!